A seraphic look, a beautiful smile.
He came knocking at my heart.
Scared of the unknown, silent stranger
“Who are you”, I asked.
With the most angelic smile,
He said, “I am Love.”
Not believing what he was saying,
I tried to negate my thoughts.
But without my knowledge, he was
Slowly creeping in my heart.
He made a place for himself inside me.
Capturing all my attention.
Like a magnet, I followed him
Not knowing where he took me.
Showing me the most beautiful world
He carried me to his land.
Where everything was like magic,
And all was calm and serene.
He gave new dreams to my life.
A new outlook to everything.
He told me that I was the most beautiful.
He said I deserved the best.
A new light flowed into me.
And music was everywhere.
I finally came to know the truth.
I now know that he really was LOVE. Close
gud one, this epitomises love
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"love" could have been a woman, ni?
scribbly
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nice poem...
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beautiful
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Thats very good soothing lines on love! enjoyed it!
krishnabaalu
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Hi,
Love surely makes the world go round! And makes one see the positive things in the world! Lovely words!
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Dear Ankita,
Beautiful description of love.
Regards,
MayaAnil
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